tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6784611692111162269.post5085933952088898222..comments2023-07-07T08:35:21.987-07:00Comments on 524 Exhibit Design class at San Francisco State: Pino Troguhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12815578485778293016noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6784611692111162269.post-26519952267722923132010-03-18T12:21:40.429-07:002010-03-18T12:21:40.429-07:00Well done. I really like the concept since lines s...Well done. I really like the concept since lines seems to be a common feature, I think this is successful rather than just having the logo on the front like what I did to mine and Pino said it looked too plain. We should definitely print these out and show him in class. One more thing to add is that since it is a postcard, on the back, we have to leave the bottom part blank for the barcode. I made the same mistake. Either shift it up or place text somewhere else.MEAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14743189479423074960noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6784611692111162269.post-18655049025381339942010-03-18T12:19:42.876-07:002010-03-18T12:19:42.876-07:00This comment has been removed by the author.MEAhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14743189479423074960noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6784611692111162269.post-39468650030228515622010-03-18T10:55:19.562-07:002010-03-18T10:55:19.562-07:00Ha never mind I just saw the colored ones. I like ...Ha never mind I just saw the colored ones. I like the blue one but maybe a little darker.J.De La Vegahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13911315890917487490noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6784611692111162269.post-53907893209657132702010-03-18T10:53:40.215-07:002010-03-18T10:53:40.215-07:00I really like the background of the front. It does...I really like the background of the front. It does have rhythm and shows the motion of pulsating. The grey is a little flat, maybe another color or shade would pop more. I think the text would look more sleek and modern on the back if it was light. I also think it would make the back<br />more interesting if the letters of the title words were more spaced out like the logo. Like how the back is on my postcard rough below.<br /><br />example: E X H I B I T I O N O P E N I N GJ.De La Vegahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13911315890917487490noreply@blogger.com